Drabble - Revenge

The parking lot was deserted. Dressed in peach gown, she was waiting for him - her Mr Perfect.

He was late again.

He stood me up!!  Was he with Emily? No, he promised.

With each ticking second, her heart sank further. For long he had escaped the truth. 

But not today.

The screeching halt of a car broke her reverie. Impeccably dressed, he got down, along with Emily. They didn’t see her standing in the corner and hand-in-hand walked towards the elevator.

Few moments later, a loud crash rocked the building.

She smiled. 

Her frame faded away. Revenge was served.



34 comments:

  1. Very nicely done! Mr Perfect was not so perfect, after all.

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  2. Excellent. Revenge is a dish best served cold indeed. :)

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  3. Maybe he ditched her for a reason! My God psycho :P
    But i like her !!
    Gripping~!

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    1. haha what a twist you added to the story :D loved it :D thanks

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  4. OOH! Revenge and a cold one at that! Nicely played :)

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  5. Dear Rajlakshmi,

    Mr. Perfect has passed his expiration date. Well played.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. He was perfect--perfectly dead! Don't mess with her.

    janet

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    1. true dat.. thank you so much for visiting :)

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  8. Such a gripping story... amazing one, Princess! :D

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  9. Well written. Apparently he misjudged her. I guess he won't do that again.

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  10. Yay!Sweet revenge-die Mr Perfect-with your beloved Emily!Loved this Rajlakshmi:-)

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