55 Fiction - Blinded by Love

Away from the disapproving eyes of the world, they met. She would share her deepest desires with him.

They thought their rendezvous was a secret.

But, her parents had forbidden her to meet him. She never understood their dislike. He was a perfect match, her Mr Right.

She called him Sam. They called him Schizophrenia.

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I came up with this plot while writing for #A2ZFiction on Twitter started by @Precarious_me




51 comments:

  1. Aah! Her distorted reality!! Good one, Raj :)

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    1. yup a distorted reality ...thank you so much Shilpa

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  2. This completely took me by surprise! Really good :)

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    1. mission accomplished :D
      thank you so much

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    1. Well she is hallucinating :)
      thanks for writing in

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  4. Nice! so much in so few words.

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  5. Well-written! Perfect ending for a 55 fiction :)

    GBU
    Arti

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    1. glad to see you here :) thank you so much

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  6. Great post! Goosebumps inducing one really.....

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    1. glad you felt that way :D thank you so much :)

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  7. Perfect friend not so perfect, after all! Great story :)

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    1. Glad you liked the story :) thank you

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  8. love can indeed be scarily blind!

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    1. truly said :) thank you so much for writing in

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  9. Uh huh. That's Stgma personified.

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    1. I guess it is ... thanks for visiting :)

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  10. made me dig the google for the disorder.. thanks!..

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    1. hahaha :D seems that's your word for the day :D thank you for dropping by

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  11. The end took me by surprise! Nice attempt!

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  12. love knows no boundaries...Rest is luck!

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    1. true... lady luck sometimes play hard :)
      thanks a lot for writing in

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    1. awww I am so happy to hear that :D thank you so much :D

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    1. Indeed. So will you be writing the rest of the story :P
      thanks a lot for dropping by

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  15. LOVED it! What a casual way to toss that last line in. :)

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    1. hehehe I was wondering if the last line felt that way or not... and you said it :D
      thank you so much :D

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  16. WOW! Simply WOW! Superbly done. Take a bow, Raj. :)

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  17. Oh that's a creatively done little story! Very nice, Rajlakshmi!

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