Drabble - Last Laugh

The rage in Sharmi's eyes was understandable. Her husband was at the door, with the woman she had thrown out a week ago. Their once peaceful home was chaotic, further proved by her dishevelled appearance. Hitesh was aware of his wife's stony glare, but he had to take a stand. His life turned topsy-turvy since the day Rumila was asked never to step in their house. Sharmi’s constant bickering over matters as little as tea-stained cups was driving him crazy.

“Sorry”, Rumila mumbled. Sharmi’s anger evaporated in a second.


She had the last laugh as Rumila – the maid was back.


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she had the last laugh

9 comments:

  1. What a brilliant twist! loved every word of it.
    Maid(made) in India .

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  2. @Nabanita
    yeah :D thanks :D

    @Magiceye
    thank you so much :D

    @Kalpana
    I am so glad you liked it :) thank you.

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  3. gahahahaahahaha.....unexpected!
    BRILLIANT!

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  4. Maid-woe..totally unexpected, I swear. Love the twist!!!
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/28/100-words-on-saturday-20144

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  5. Aah! the story of our lives!!
    Good one! :)

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