55 Fiction – Choice

Single parenting is tough. My only daughter rebelled, left home and chose a path that I didn’t approve of.

I was scared of the past haunting me back.


But today when I met her, she looked most beautiful, dressed in Khaki uniform with three stars on her shoulders. As graceful as her mother did once.

Written for Wednesday Prompt – She looked most beautiful

14 comments:

  1. well of course she did look beautiful indeed.i hope all the kids who rebel and walk out .turn half as beautiful.nice dxbnidblog

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  2. most of the runaway kids end up in juvenile /destitute homes but our little heroine is a model example. Salute her.

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  3. most of the runaway kids end up in juvenile /destitute homes but our little heroine is a model example. Salute her.

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  4. lucky child I should say but that's what her mother did once,so much in 55 words,well done

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  5. a totally different take on prompt!! really liked!

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  6. Wow! That's such a different take on the prompt!! Glad that she took that path and made her mother proud. :)

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  7. Hi Raj. This is indeed a very refreshing take on the prompt.....

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  8. What a lovely take on the prompt. So different from others, but extraordinary!

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  9. ohh this is a great story in a few words :)

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  10. Thanks A Lot Everyone For Reading And Leaving Comments... You Guys Made My Day :D

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  11. Thanks A Lot Everyone For Reading And Leaving Comments... You Guys Made My Day :D

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