[Thursday Poet's Rally week 50]::Goodbye::




Form Shape Poetry

I wrote this long time back. Re-posting it for Thursday Poet's Rally

16 comments:

  1. Really a long time since I saw your shape poetry!!! Wonderful one!!

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  2. How did you do that Raji!
    Girl, you got patience in tons!

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  3. This is a brilliant and thoroughly creative piece. Your wordcraft is amazing. Reading your poem shows me that I still have a long journey ahead of me

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  4. Amazing layout...Keep up the good work..

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  5. Amazing layout...Keep up the good work..

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  6. Ha ha. Awesome work, and nice poem as well!! I wish I could do something of this sort. *sigh*

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  7. Beautiful form, and filled with outstanding lines! Very well done!

    My poem this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/she-sat-alone-2/

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  8. Phew!! You stand out each time. The poem was heavy :)

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  9. you rock.

    extraordinary piece, love your talent on shape poetry.

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  10. Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
    Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!

    It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!

    Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

    some of my Haiku Collections
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/

    and also, on my very recent Work as well
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/

    !!! Happy Rally !!!
    Cheers !!

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  11. You pretty much said what i could not effectively communicate. +1

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  12. Like! "I stood in the silence of asphyxiating ashes" - great line!

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  13. What a splendid post! Loved it!!

    I am here ~ http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/whispers-of-the-soul/

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  14. This is excellent and such talent. My entry for the first rally is http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/01/life-memories/

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  15. Meticulously arranged both in format and word selection. It's so lovely!

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  16. Form poetry...must try it. Yours is interesting.The images of ashes is so apt for the theme you have chosen.Love it.
    Rosie

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