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Truth


He was confused, scared, nervous – at the same time. If only he had enough courage to utter those three words.



How will she react? What she will think? Hundred possibilities flashed before him. But then she loved him too.





She had to know the truth.Quietly he approached her.



“Mom I failed.”



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14 comments:

  1. every child's worst fear and nightmare!

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  2. Awww...Poor kid..And good shock to both mom and us :)

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  3. well i never uttered the word.."fail"..
    i was too scared to do that..
    i just went and showed my marksheet to mom..

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  4. Exams and results r over for this lifetime ... thank God ;)

    Well written :)

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  5. Hahahaha..poor kid..Those moments are hell :-)

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  6. excellent 55 raj, enjoyed this..

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  7. Nice one !!! never had to go through this torture !

    and btw, this is how 55-ers are supposed to be, na ? :D :D :D :D

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  8. Gud one..kept the tempo till the end..!! Perfect 55..!!

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  9. Never expected that... A child must go through terrible times to utter those 3 words

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  10. Nice one...expected a different outcome though :)

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  11. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/14/the-celebrate-poet-of-may-award-nominations/

    welcome voting for awards of May..
    your link is in, u get one automatically,
    when you comment to vote, you get another vote for yourself as well...
    thank you for the attention!
    ;)

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