Escape

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Form - Shape Poetry

** Here I have tried to express the feeling of a women who had lost her loved one long time back... each day she had spent in pain and loneliness, and her only escape from the solitude was when she breathe her last.

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50 comments:

  1. Oh My My... Princess...
    You are simply tooooo goooddd...
    you and your shapes.. and yes now i know why you are late in postin..
    this much have taken quite some time..
    and the topic.. ishh.. :(
    beautifully portrayed with the broken petals....
    chinta nakko...
    Aal Eez Well.. re Aal eez well :D

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  2. It was beautiful..The shape as well as the words...



    All the best for BAT 10

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  3. Ahhh..How do you manage to present poetry in such beautiful form in a blog? It truly amazes me. Lovely...

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  4. altogether a totally different presentation ... unique one :)
    liked this concept of image story telling....
    nice one ...
    keep expressing :)

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  5. Your world it is amazing,I really love your blog :) BEAUTIFUL.
    marinela x x

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  6. wow u are so creative dear, this was awsome, u are awsome xxx

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  7. Creative, cute and a warm post .. loved it completely! :)

    All the best ! :)

    in love with me and life..escape !

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  8. hey its awesome shape poetry.. and the broken petals beautifully carry the message that u want to convey.. :)

    All the best for the batom.. :)

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  9. great great great....
    a very creative way to express... first time with "shape poetry" and I love it...
    Cheers LIFE
    JD

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  10. Amazing. Very creative - making full use of visual media. Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton. I am in dilemma whether to vote for your creativity over a few other literary delights of this blog-a-ton.

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  11. Lovely! I've tried my hand at these, but gosh, I have no talent! This is talent. Good job Raj! and all the luck with Batom 10!

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  12. RL, u r fantastic with these shape poetries. teach me how to do it sometime! :) i'm awed at that creativity actually! well said, illustrated!

    all the best for BATOM!!

    Escape

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  13. Rajlakshmi this is my first encounter with "form poetry"... and must say this is sheer brilliance...

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  14. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/02/poetry-awards-for-week-16-thursday-poets-rally/

    3 poetry awards,
    2 friendship award...
    Happy Sunday!

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  15. this was a beautiful poem Raj...

    I loved the way you have presented it...wonderful..

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  16. beautiful words .. Touched me somewhere. Best wishes to you and love.

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  17. How could you??? Both the words and the picture are brilliant!!

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  18. Very creative. A different and beautiful way of presenting ESCAPE.

    Sureindran R. - Escape

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  19. Unusual idea, using shape poetry! I love how the petals slowly fall off the flower, as she escapes to a world of 'no pain'. :)
    Best of luck for B-A-T!

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  20. Just for my knowledge...Is this type of Shape Poetry called Calligramme??

    Beautiful Reading. Unique way to portray your poem.

    Thanks for the comments on my post. All the Best for B-A-T!! :D

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  21. Shape poetry? I hadn't heard about it until I saw it on you blog. Very refreshing idea! :)
    But your poem was sad. :(

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  22. Loved the presentation and the wonderful play with words.

    Keep up the good work :)

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  23. Loved the shape poetry:) Gud one :)

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  24. I am totally speechless...
    Creativity in its awesomeness!
    love it! love you!
    hugs
    shakira

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  25. So touching! All the best :)

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  26. Beautiful presentation dear poetess....

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  27. Hey totally new concept introduced to blog-a-tonics :)
    the only prob i hd was in the scnd pic where it was bit confusing as to which petal to read next.. mayb some kind of direction mechanism cud b used.. bt beautiful words woven in2 a beautiful post.. kudos :)

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  28. Shape poetry? wow! that was something new. Just loved the way you wrote on the flower petals. Too good girl. Beautiful words, story and presentation.

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  29. I love your poetry and just how on earth did you make the shapes?

    Wonderful.

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  30. wow, i loved this!! especially the presentation...excellent! keep it up and all the very best!

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  31. @Megzz
    you and your shapes.. and yes now i know why you are late in postin..// arey wo shape sochte sochte time laga... banane mei nahi :P
    beautifully portrayed with the broken petals....// thankie thankie :D
    /Aal Eez Well.. re Aal eez well // yes yes :D
    thanks a lot for such wonderful words :D

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  32. @Geeta
    thanks a lot :D

    @Choco
    //How do you manage to present poetry in such beautiful form in a blog?// hehehe it just happens :D
    thanks a lot :D

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  33. @Mahesh
    /How do you manage to present poetry in such beautiful form in a blog?// thank you su much
    do keep visiting :D

    @short poems
    @william
    thank you so much :D

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  34. @Sourav
    welcome to my blog :)
    thanks a lot :D

    @Sushoban
    / the broken petals beautifully carry the message that u want to convey// I am so glad it did... I was actually wondering abt that :P
    thank you so much :)

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  35. @JD
    //first time with "shape poetry" and I love it// :D you will love it even more if you start writing one :D
    thanks a lot :D

    @The fool
    /making full use of visual media. Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton.// :D :D
    // I am in dilemma whether to vote for your creativity // its an honour that you gave it a thought :D
    thank you so much :D

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  36. @Saro
    thank you sooo much :D

    @Leo
    // I am in dilemma whether to vote for your creativity // hehehe sure thing :D
    thank you so muchhhhh :D :D

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  37. @Dhiman
    //and must say this is sheer brilliance...// awwwww thank you soo much
    I am so glad :D

    @Jingle
    you are so sweet ji... thank you so much :D

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  38. @Lazy Pineapple
    / loved the way you have presented it...wonderful..// thank you so much :D

    @silent observer
    @tikulicious
    @Insignia
    @Sureindran
    thank you soo much :D

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  39. @Blabberblah
    /I love how the petals slowly fall off the flower, as she escapes to a world of 'no pain'// :D
    thanks a lot for the kind words :D

    @Rumya
    //Is this type of Shape Poetry called Calligramme// as a matter of fact I google the word :P
    i knew this as shape poetry... seems the both are same :D
    thanks a lot :D

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  40. @CB
    @shilpa
    @swaram
    @Chitra
    @Karan
    thank you so much :D

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  41. @Nethra
    so finally you what it is :)
    thanks a lot :D


    @shakira
    //Creativity in its awesomeness!
    love it! love you!// awww you are so sweet shakira
    thanks a lot

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  42. @Vipul
    well one the read them on the basis of height... whichever comes first...
    point taken... will take care of that in future :)
    thanks a lot :D

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  43. @AvadaK
    thank you so much for the encouraging words :D
    really glad you liked it :)

    @Akelamalu
    @Mehak
    thank you so much :D

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    thanks for the beautiful job!
    please visit my other blog via the link!

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  45. Great going gal! I am sorry, I wanted to but forgot mentioning your name in my vote where I mentioned about all those whose posts I really liked (I had reading through-out the week, and my method was in a complete disarray!).

    It was a wonderful way of expression and such beautiful words too! :)

    Keep it up, and teach me too? :D

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  47. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-for-nomination/

    Please feel free to nominate fellow poets for April Celebrate Poetry award.
    Many thanks!

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