[Thursday Rally]::Will you still love me tomorrow::


Will you still love me tomorrow?

Years welcome with wrinkled embrace,
blossoms have withered, shrinking grace,
from destiny, smiles I borrow,
and watch them shimmer in your eyes,
moment enclosing for goodbyes,
will your heart then drown in sorrow?
Uncertainty clouds, dream sublime,
with unceasing rhythm of time,
Will you still love me tomorrow?


Poetry Form-Nove Otto
The Nove Otto poetry form was created by Scott J. Alcorn. It is a nine-lined poem with 8 syllables per line (isosyllabic). The rhyme scheme is as follows: aacbbcddc.


 


This is my first time and I hope I am doing it right :) ... Its wonderful platform for poets to participate and interact with each other :)

I also choose Promising Poet award... specially made by Jingle...



And would like to pass them on to :

1)  Megzone
5) Pat

Do check out there blogs... they are awesome poets :)

33 comments:

  1. suppperrrbbb... princesss... simply marvelous...
    thanks for the award.. and here's a homecoming award for you too... :D
    http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/03/04/thursday-poets-rally-enraptured-enchantments/

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  2. WOW!
    Amazing write.
    Thanks for introducing to this form of poetry.
    Always a pleasure reading your verses.

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  3. Hello Raji
    I know it's good!!! I'm not up on style lol,it's interesting when you say I love and get it back.But when the changes of life kick in then comes "Will you Love me Still" wonderful poem I really enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for "honoring" me with this award!!!!!

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  4. good work always happy to meet another rhymer poet also thanks for the award. Your skill has earned you a place on my blogroll.

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  5. soothing poem :)
    well written & rich in vocab as usual ...

    keep blogging
    cheers !!!

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  6. Cool poem indeed.
    congrats to everyone

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  7. A lovely poem. Welcome to the fun and thank you for the award.

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  8. ya know it was just lovely...i think they will. smiles.

    thanks for the nod as well with the award.

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  9. uncertainty comes when time changes, most of the time, yes, love remains...awesome question!
    beautifully done!

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  10. an award is waiting 4 u in my forever friends post,
    please enjoy!
    I appreciate your time and effort in participating week 8 Rally.

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  11. hi Rajlakshmi!

    nice poem and i can't believe that's your first one.


    ;)

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  12. Wow! Thatz beautiful :) Done it so well in those 9 lines!

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  13. Nice work dear. I know how difficult it is choose the right words as it has to rhyme in a poem.all the best.

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  14. Didn't know about that! Very well expressed:) must've been challenging no?!

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  15. awe thanks dear for this award how kind, wow never knew u had 2 blogs this one is as nice as the other, I will treasure this xx

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  16. magic in the words :)..

    urs..hemu..

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  17. how r you?
    an award 4 u in my blog.

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  18. not able to understand the poem.. :( :(

    Congrats on the award :) :)

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  19. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/06/jingles-happy-moments-cross-culture-poetry-award/

    here is the link!

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  20. Hey..
    Nice One..

    P.S. Award for you waiting on my blog.. :)

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  21. Thank you so much for the award.. im sorry i was not able to comment sooner... :)

    you have written such a cute and lovely poem... :)

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  22. Wow..There is such simplicity and such depth in your words...Lovely read!

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  23. @Megz
    thank kiiiii :D :D
    another award wowww :D
    thanks a lot madam :)

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  24. @Zave
    @Pat
    @shoeless
    thank you so much :D
    so glad to have you in my space :)

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  25. @Sathish
    @anonymous
    @jaymiethorne
    @Brian
    thank you so much :)

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  26. @Jingle
    awww jingle :)
    ao manyyy awards :D
    thank you so muchhhhh !!! :D

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  27. @art
    no no its not my first... but first time i thursday rally :)

    @Creativity
    @Samvedna
    @Swaram
    thank you so much for appreciating it :)

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  28. @Chitra
    @lostworld
    thank you so much :)

    @william
    @Hemanth
    thank you so much :)

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  29. @kanagu
    well but do keep visiting :)

    @Arpit
    thanks you so much :D

    @ishabellemanalo
    @CG
    thank you so much :D

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  30. the poetry was sensitive and beautiful

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  31. that is a truly beautiful poem. At times when working on a structured form, many lose sight of the 'beauty'. Not so with yours - absolutely beautiful!

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