::Love, Lost in time::




Lonely was the night, hooted an owl nearby,
slowly she glided , under start-studded sky,
Silver gown flowed, over the velvet moss,
waved dark tresses, reflecting angelic gloss,

Staring at the words, embossed in gold,
trickled solitary tear,silent and cold,
{Caressing his wounds,her heart had shivered
resting in embrace,breath quivered, }

Blossoms lay dried,withered was her heart
engraved on a stone - Till Death do us part.
Each dusk, when sun goes down the hill,
arrives her apparition, serene and still.


21 comments:

  1. beautifully depicted the intense emotions - the last line though gave me creeps!

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  2. really intense.... but in my opinion u cud have changed the second pic to something more serener

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  3. You have captured the emotions quite well..beautifully written indeed.

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  4. Wonderfully written .. all emotions just rt :)

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  5. very beautifully written yet again :)
    u make me comment on ur post everytime :)


    keep blogging
    cheers !!!

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  6. Another amazing poet, I see! :)
    your words touched and embraced me... I could actually see and feel her! Wonderful!!

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  7. You really have a way with words. Appreciate the talent. Keep it up.

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  8. Wow...wonderful!! and it was a ghost!! Strongly described emotions

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  9. eyes try hard..
    to let out tears..

    good one!

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  10. @D_Observer
    creeps huh :P
    thanks a lot :D

    @Jon
    ya even i thought the picture was a little too bold...
    thanks a lot :D

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  11. @Gyanban
    thank you so much :D

    @Swaram
    thanks a lot :D

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  12. @Sathish
    hehehe I am glad you dropped by and commented :D
    thanks a lot :D

    @Kanagu
    thank you :D

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  13. @Guria
    //your words touched and embraced me... // awww
    glad you liked it
    thnaks a lot :D

    @Chitra
    thank you so much
    welcome to my blog :)

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  14. @Bhagyashree
    welcome to my blog gal :D
    thanks a lot :D

    @Pixie
    thank you so much :D

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  15. @Insignia
    /it was a ghost!! // yes it was :D
    thanks a lot :D

    @Harini
    thanks a lot :D

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  16. @Sankoobaba
    so did you cry :P
    hehehe thanks a lot :D

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  17. u painted the drama of love and emotions along with it very animatedly and beautifully.
    I enjoy your blog,
    it is a breathe of fresh air.
    best!

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