[Shape poetry]:: The Saviour Angel ::

Whew!!! finally made it… not as good as I pictured :( but it was all I could manage with the darned editor… I was literally begging my system to accept the alignment :) … what was I thinking.... Anyways enjoy :)


Btw, she’s an Angel, in case you were not able to guess it correctly :P and Please read the wings separately… they are separate stanzas :)

Please click on the picture for better view :)








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34 comments:

  1. truly never read a poet so mesmerizing..
    really skill you have got there..
    keep it up!!

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  2. U r really very talented...do make use of it!!
    I really liked it!!

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  3. My god!!! You are really very very talented. This is really out of the world. Never come across anything like this before.

    It was really really good...Keep trying more :-)

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  4. Beautiful Angel..
    That Computer+Literary piece of Art is so Great.. That i am Comment Less.. :P

    n Seriously.. Your Idea of Angel is like MAGGI TOMATO KETCHUP *Its Different* ...

    Keep up the good work.. :)

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  5. unbelievable!! It's so perfect...how did you mange to shape it up like this?? Even the flow of the gown!! Seriously i had to look at it for a few minutes to believe it. Beautiful words and wonderful creation. Hats off!!

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  6. How did you manage to weave in so many thoughts in so little space?
    Beautiful are the verses as is the picture.

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  7. Good one as usual ....Hey think about writing a book :)

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  8. This is unbelievably beautiful! How did you do it? How much time did you spend on it? The shape of the angel is visible so clearly and the apt words. You seem to be a good poet. The light coloured patch...very good imagination. The change of colour - face, chest and the skirt, beautiful.

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  9. Just like the others who have commented before me, I'm open-mouthed & astonished!!! HOW!!! The most beautiful angel ever..You have managed to create a personality too. Keep it up. Want to see more :-)

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  10. Just like the others who have commented before me, I'm open-mouthed & astonished!!! HOW!!! The most beautiful angel ever..You have managed to create a personality too. Keep it up. Want to see more :-)

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  11. this is the bestest thing ever that i have read and seen when it comes to creativity..keep it up girl..you have got a fan out here :)

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  12. This is beautiful! The poem and the angel!

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  13. @Sankoobaba
    @Nazish
    @Insignia
    thank you so much for your encouraging words :)

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  14. @Arpit
    //That Computer+Literary piece of Art is so Great.. That i am Comment Less// :D
    //Your Idea of Angel is like MAGGI TOMATO KETCHUP *Its Different*// lolzzz
    thank you so much :D

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  15. @Sakshi
    @Gyanban
    @Koshy
    thank you so much
    welcome to my blog :)

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  16. @Anish
    whose gonna read my book :) you will have to buy if I ever write :D
    thanks a lot :D

    @Sandhya
    I almost died aligning it... but after lot os struggle it came out ... not as good as i expected though :)
    thank you so much :D

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  17. @Never...

    thank you so much :D

    @Narendra
    Angel pe fida ho gaye ho kiya :P

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  18. @lost world
    @Neha
    @Ariyathe
    @Deepazarth
    thank you so much :D

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  19. Ur angel is beautiful both in figure and words;-))!!!!

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  20. Oh wow!!! I am speechless!! This is unbelievably good. I am actually thinking of taking a print out and posting it on my desk.....ofcourse with your permission!! ;)

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  21. I am at a loss for words..

    Simply Fabulous!

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  22. @Reflections
    thanks a lot :D

    @Massod
    wow of course u hv my permission :D
    thank you so much :D

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  23. @Swaram
    @Sweetness

    thank you so much :D

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  24. This is so impressive in every way. Your words are beautiful. I found you through the Colors Magazine; congratulations for being a winner!

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  25. Wonderfully created dear!!! angelic!!

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  26. Congratulations on your win in The Colors Magazine contest. Wow! Now I see why and bow to the superior blogger! Impressive and meaningful.

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  27. This is so beautiful Raj...i surmise you must be a very good artist as you can make beautiful shape poems!

    I admire you in this really! Keep writing, keep shaping your beautiful thoughts!

    Love,

    Amity

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