[55 Fiction-3rd Position] :: Her Last Breath::

Darkness was threatening to consume her.

Echoing in her ears were lullabies once sung by her mother. Torturous pain seared through the tiny mass as someone pulled her leg. Ruthlessly she was dragged out in her final moments.

Blank.

Murdered by betrayal.

“Abortion successful”.

** Won 3rd place in 55 Fiction Writing contest by The Colors Magazine...

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** It is my first work of fiction and first ever 55 fiction :)

17 comments:

  1. Hey this was one of the best 55-fictions i have come across :)
    Really thoughtful post yaar....


    love ur blog :)
    u have a new follower :)


    keep blogging
    cheers!!!!

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  2. Congratulations on the award Rajlakshmi. Even though this is only a fiction, I am struggling to find proper words to express my deep sorrow.

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  3. Awesome..shatters the mind completely.

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  4. OMG! That ws so well expressed :(

    Congrats girl! U totally deserve the award!

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  5. Painful truth...touched my heart.

    Congratulations on your award..well deserved.

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  6. Once again congratulations!
    Wonderfully done!

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  7. hey.. this is awesome.. :)

    congrats on the awards.. truly desevered one :)

    keep writing :)

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  8. @Satish
    Thank you so much :)
    keep visiting :)
    cheers :D

    @SG
    Awww but your words do said it all
    thank you so much :D

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  9. @Antarman
    @Swaram
    Thanks a lot guys :D
    nice receive such encouraging comments :)

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  10. @Kavita
    @Lena
    @Kanagu

    Thank you so much :)
    Glad that you liked it :)

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  11. This was awesome.Great writing!Keep more coming

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  12. Great, great piece. The fact that it is your first time is amazing. Keep writing. Like your blog. You have a new reader.

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  13. @Miss Nobody
    @Brian

    Thanks a lot :D do keep visiting :D

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  14. wow...*speechless for while*...amazing...

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  15. such a nice try at fiction 55.. cant believe it's your first :O too good and Congrats!!!

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